Training the tone

Writing about the place I live in an objective tone:

I live in an apartment at the 10th floor of a comfortable building. It was built on the 90’s so it is not as small as the modern ones. There is enough space for me, my husband and my eight cats. The apartment has four bedrooms, three bathrooms, a quite large kitchen and a also a room where me and my husband are used to be at the sofa watching TV.

Writing about the place I live in a sentimental tone:

I live in an apartment that belongs to my mother. I’ve already lived here before when I was a teenager, and I have many good memories from that time. Although the neighborhood changed quite a lot, most of the buildings remains the same and the park that is close from my building is still similar to twenty years ago. Particularly, I like to study in the mornings in the sunlight at my former bedroom, that is now arranged as an office. This is a very cozy room and I feel very comfortable there, as I did twenty years ago.

Writing about the place I live in a frustrated tone:

I live in an apartment that is quite a mess. When I moved here, I didn’t have enough furniture, so I had to buy some cheap stuff just to have something to fill the place. The courtains are very old, they’re from twenty years ago so they’re out-of-date and has some minor problems, as some parts are rotten and decayed. I wish I could make it up but I just can’t do it now  because I’m not working at the moment so I don’t have enough money to do so. Unfortunately,  I have to cope with this poor conditions for now.

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